

Aah SPFBO, we are back in a new time period for the start. I got my batch of six titles and I was off. With all six books, I read 20% of them before deciding whether to read each title in its entirety. For me, this time all six titles were very cool looking. Mine is the third batch to be read and you can read what Lukasz and Jack thought of their batches in the links above.
My thanks to all six authors for their submission and being brave to submit their babies for being reviewed by unknown people. It takes a special kind of mental fortitude to toil away in creating these stories and then setting them free into the world for being read and judged. I applaud you all.
So here are my thoughts on all of them:

Chalmach Chronicles by Torbjørn Øverland Amundsen – I started my SPFBO read with this book because I found the blurb to be very intriguing. In my previous years in SPFBO, I read a book like this, and I had enjoyed it immensely. The Chalmach Chronicles follows on in this manner, and I very much enjoyed it. Each story was a different one and highlighted the magic present within the world as well as the different aspects of the city. I really enjoyed how the author showcased the city’s geographical aspects within each story as it added to the story’s depth. The stories also reference characters from the other stories, and this adds to the plot depth.
Overall I would really recommend this book as I very much enjoyed it for its ingenuity, and I will be buying the sequel as well.
Night of The Illumination by Jacob Montanez – Night Of The Illumination is an epic fantasy that has dark edges and great prose. I enjoyed reading this book but had to DNF it around the 50% mark as the book’s pace had slowed down significantly. This book had a lot of epic feel to the main plot, it was also very dark. The world settings are constantly hinted at but never properly revealed
I think I wasn’t the right reader for this story. The writing style is very in-depth and while it isn’t the purple kind, it has beauty to it. Overall, this would be great for those who are looking for something different. Think along the lines of Mark Lawrence, Michael R. Fletcher and Brian Staveley, Jacob Montanez is a writer with a unique voice and style.
The Golden Scarab of Balihar by Michael Grayford – The Golden Scarab was a fun and fast read set in a world that’s reminiscent of South-West Asia. The writing was very succinct, and the pace of the story was smooth. Overall I enjoyed this story wherein the female MC uses her wits and the world has a very Arabian nights feel. This story flowed quickly and was a bit predictable but that’s not a knock on the book or the author. The humour quotient especially with the Jinn is a solid factor for the enjoyment of the story and alongside the brilliant and plucky protagonist is a plus for the story.
This is a good effort, and it's a fun twist on the Aladdin fable but it’s also geared for newer fantasy readers and older/experienced fantasy readers might not find anything new within bar the settings. I would easily see this story be in much demand for younger (tween and teenage) readers and would make a great animated show or movie. This

The Dragon of the Dread Deep by C.D. McKenna – This was a book which I was most excited for as it featured nautical fantasy and pirates. I finished this book as quickly as I could as it featured dragon riders, action and magic. For me however, this book had a very slow start but the characters, especially the main protagonist Cassian was enticing enough for me to continue. As I read on, I realized this book while a standalone is set in the world of the Vorelian Saga books. There might have been nods to the main events but because I haven’t read those works, I couldn’t tell.
The story kicks into proper gear by the middle and from there it’s all about battles, treachery, dragon magic and being decent in a cutthroat world. I wouldn’t call this world grimdark but it occupies the space nicely between dark and grimdark fantasy. There’s not a lot of good people, just folks with various plans and agendas and some who are trying to do the decent thing. The world introduced within is a complicated one and for fans of high fantasy, will be very pleased.
The Dragon of the Dread Deep is a dark fantasy that explores how doing the right thing can lead to more problems. Full of magic, action, betrayals, TDOTDD is a book for those looking to get lost in a complex world.

The Sins of Steel and Shadow by Steve Pannett – The Sins of Steel & Shadow was another title which beguiled me with its blurb. This is a world wherein humans and vampires co-exist with simmering tensions and navigating these landmines is out protagonist Bail Neren. He is deemed a Turned, not entirely Vampyr but far away from a human. Hated by one and deemed lowly by other, Bail often stays in the shadows for his safety.
TSOSAS is a dark, gritty story with strong focus on characters. For me, I enjoyed the slow reveal of the world, Bail’s cautious wanderings in the world and his alliances within the city. There’s a proper mystery afoot within the main plot and this book is very much for fans of Daniel Polansky and RJ Barker.I had read the previous book by this author and while that was a western fantasy, this book was another different one. The mystery plot was nicely unveiled and the ending was a complete shocker for me. For readers who enjoy character-driven stories, mixed in moral ambiguity, socio-political intrigue, and low fantasy settings, this book will be for you.

Throne of Darkness by Spencer Russell Smith – I’m going to say this right upfront this is one of the wildest fantasy books I’ve read since I started reading fantasy in 1999-2000. The prologue is like Wheel Of Time epic but juiced up with BSG SF richness.
There’s no way for me to describe it but to implore readers to just read and decide for themselves. This book is for lovers of Tolkien, Sanderson and Christopher Ruocchio, those worldbuilding gods whose skills leave us readers wowed. Spencer Russell Smith can easily labelled in their level as one can easily see in this book. Besides the worldbuilding, this book has a lot of characters and it is action-packed to its gills. The story while straightforward, does require a lot of attention as the author drops us into the world of Efruumani and handholds us while giving us all the details and intricacies of the system within (I very much was reminded of my first read of R. Scott Bakker’s The Darkness That Came Before)
For me, this was such a wild read, that I had no comparison for it. The writing does take a while to adjust to and the prose is kept steady because of the way the main story unfolds. I had to go with the flow a lot as I was trying to take in all the world info and story details. This wasn’t the most enjoyable way, but this story demanded as the main story occurs over the space of 4 days and some hours and it ends with an explosive resolution that’s buttressed with two epilogues.
All I will say about Throne Of Darkness is that this book is unlike any that you have read before, and while it does have its shortcomings (prose, information overload), the story pace, worldbuilding and magic system (gem, metal based, and light enhanced) simply overpowers those flaws. This is one of those titles which will have its fans and detractors in equal order but it is a hidden gem and Spencer Russell Smith can be proud of what a unique story he has envisioned. Throne Of Darkness is a unique science-apocalpytic epic fantasy in a league of its own. Read it and find out where you stand in its wake.
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So after finishing my lot, I had a very heavy choice to make. There were four obvious titles which I read and while they challenged me, each of them was enjoyable in their own special way. So I would like to highlight these four titles and implore SPFBO readers to check them out as it’s only due to the nature of the competition that I must select one among these four:

2) Throne of Darkness
3) The Dragon of the Dread Deep
4) The Sins of Steel and Shadow
For choosing my SPFBO semifinalist, it came down to my personal enjoyment as to which book provided a full story and had the least flaws. I must apologize to all the authors as I don’t mean to imply that there was anything wrong with their stories. In choosing one among these four, the remaining three aren’t unworthy. They would have been my top choice in any previous edition, and I hope readers do check them out irrespective of my choice below….
So, without any further waiting, my SPFBO semifinalist is
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The Sins of Steel and Shadow by Steve Pannett was the one book which I enjoyed the most and will be putting forward for my FBC co-judges to read in our quest to select a finalist. Many congratulations to Steve Pannett and my commiserations to all the authors in my lot of six. I want to thank you for allowing me to read your books and giving me an opportunity to provide my thoughts on them.


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ABOUT THE AUTHOR: Jim Butcher is the author of the Dresden Files, the Codex Alera, and a new steampunk series, the Cinder Spires. His resume includes a laundry list of skills which were useful a couple of centuries ago, and he plays guitar quite badly. An avid gamer, he plays tabletop games in varying systems, a variety of video games on PC and console, and LARPs whenever he can make time for it. Jim currently resides mostly inside his own head, but his head can generally be found in his home town of Independence, Missouri.
Jim goes by the moniker Longshot in a number of online locales. He came by this name in the early 1990′s when he decided he would become a published author. Usually only 3 in 1000 who make such an attempt actually manage to become published; of those, only 1 in 10 make enough money to call it a living. The sale of a second series was the breakthrough that let him beat the long odds against attaining a career as a novelist.
All the same, he refuses to change his nickname.
Publisher: Ace (January 20, 2026) Page count: 463 p Formats: audiobook, ebook, hardcover
I’ve been reading The Dresden Files for a long time now. It’s one of the very few long-running series I’ve stuck with. It’s had highs and lows, but Twelve Months shows Jim Butcher in excellent form again.
After the relentless escalation of Peace Talks and Battle Ground, this book slows down. It basically follows a year of Harry’s grief, fallout, and rebuilding.
Harry is hollowed out. Chicago is barely functioning after the Titan’s assault. Food is scarce. Infrastructure is wrecked. The supernatural world has been exposed, and fear is spreading. On top of that, Harry is juggling Thomas’s looming death sentence, training a new apprentice, navigating White Council politics (again), and preparing for an arranged marriage to Lara Raith under Mab’s orders.
The real conflict here is internal. For once, the greatest enemy in the book is grief. Harry struggles to eat. To sleep. To focus. His magic wavers because his control wavers. This is a far more introspective Dresden novel than we’re used to, and it works.
That doesn’t mean it’s dull. There are fights. There are ghouls prowling Chicago. There are political landmines, tense confrontations, and a climax that absolutely delivers. But the action feels more personal this time.
The biggest surprise for me was how well Butcher handled the relationships. Harry and Lara could easily have fallen into forced tension or cheap drama. Instead, their dynamic is layered and unexpectedly thoughtful. There’s distrust, yes, but also honesty and even vulnerability. It feels like growth.
Old allies step up too. Molly. Michael. Maggie. Even Mab, in her own severe way. The book reminds you how deep this cast is after eighteen installments.
Some readers will call this a transitional novel, and they’re not wrong. It’s a recalibration. A pause before the Outsider endgame looms closer. But it doesn’t feel like filler. After years of escalating power and misery, Butcher pulls the story back to its roots: Harry Dresden the man, not just the wizard.
For me, it might be some of the best writing in the series. More mature and more controlled. Less snark-for-snark’s-sake. The humor is still there, but it shares space with reflection and wisdom.
If the series needed a reset, this was the right way to do it.
The competition continues! This is my first year as a judge and I’m thrilled to be a part of it.
A few notes on my review process: for a semifinalist, I wanted to find a book that I'd personally rate 3.5/5 or better. To me, that rating signifies a book which has some notable flaws, but whose flaws (for whatever reason) didn't stop me from enjoying the novel. In general, a novel isn't a 3.5/5 for me unless I'm actively interested in reading a sequel. If and when I bounced off a book in the opening pages, I typically put it down for a few days before giving it another try. I didn’t set any hard rules for myself about when or if I could drop a book, except that I wanted to give every book a fair shot on its merits.
My batch (in randomly-determined reading order) included the following six books:
Without further ado:
The Butterfly Koi by A. Sherman KarlssonThe Butterfly Koi follows six POV protagonists, most of whom are involved to greater or lesser degrees in the criminal and magical sides of the novel’s slightly-futuristic Tokyo setting. There’s Eika, a celebrity and socialite who wants to use her influence to change the world for the better; Misora, a magitech engineer with ties to organized crime; Taehyun, Misora’s celebrity boyfriend; Cameron, another magitech engineer and American expat; Hatsumi, a journalist driven to uncover certain secrets others want to keep hidden; and Kenji (far and away the most entertaining character), a low-level criminal in the Tokyo underworld.
For starters, while I do think this book is technically fantasy, it’s not traditional fantasy fare. That’s not disqualifying, but it’s something readers should know going in. Although the story revolves around magical technology, the magitech doesn’t feel particularly magical – the kind of magitech we see most often is basically a modern cell phone.
There are some real positives here: each of the six POV characters is well-realized with a distinct internal life that feels psychologically real. The prose is good, and the slightly-futuristic Tokyo setting is richly envisioned. I’ve never been to Tokyo so I can’t speak to its accuracy, but it feels like the author both knows and loves the city and wants to share that love with the reader. These strengths kept me reading and enjoying The Butterfly Koi all the way to the end.
Unfortunately, the story has some pretty severe flaws. For starters, I think the book would’ve been much better if 2-3 of the 6 POVs (all of whom exist in each others’ orbits) had been cut. Of the 6, only 1 (Kenji) got what I’d consider a completed plot arc, while 2 could be cut as POVs without any loss to the overall narrative. The author has a frustrating habit of backtracking chronologically at the end of many chapters to retell the events of the prior chapter from a second character’s POV. This slows the story’s progression and stops it from building momentum. It felt like the author only wanted to convey a person’s internal experience via present-tense first-person perspective, rather than via recollection or another character’s observations. Also, the author places several of the POV characters in opposition to magitech-related social ills (mostly related to how a minority of the population lacks the innate ability to use magitech effectively). In my opinion, the author needed to demonstrate more clearly why the reader should share the characters’ concerns.
Let Sleeping Gods Lie by Ben SchenkmanI'd call Let Sleeping Gods Lie as an urban fantasy or paranormal mystery set in New Haven, Connecticut. The story follows adjunct anthropology professor Corbin Pierce as he digs into some mysterious magical oddities that begin popping up in town. He investigates and faces threats to the local people, the local spirits, and the local environment, all while trying to figure out what’s behind it all. The magical lore and worldbuilding place a strong focus on Native American history and culture.
There’s a lot to like about this novel. To start with, it wins my personal award for Most Unique Animal on a Fantasy Cover! I've seen dragons, wolves, lions, tigers, and bears (oh my!), but a raccoon? That's a first for me. As for the content, the story reminds me of Wildbow's serial Pale, as well as the early novels of the Dresden Files. Schenkman has a knack for infusing real-world settings with magic, making it feel like the supernatural might be hiding under our noses in real life as well as in fiction. The prose is straightforward and readable, with a nice bit of humor coming through in the narrative voice. In contrast with Butcher's Dresden (a small business owner working closely with the police), Let Sleeping Gods Lie takes a distinctly progressive perspective (activism, environmentalism, a focus on Native American heritage). I found Corbin a tad self-righteous at times, but not enough to interfere with my enjoyment of the story.
I really had only one issue with the book, but it's a big one. A mystery needs at least a little complexity to keep the reader in suspense: multiple suspects, red herrings, misdirection. Here, we don't really get that. The focus of the novel is the mystery behind the dark happenings in New Haven; it feels like the reader is supposed to be wondering who's responsible and why. But the list of potential villains is tiny, so much so that the mystery loses any suspense. The major plot moments are interesting on their own terms, but each resolves a little too quickly and neatly. I feel like this novel would've been greatly improved by another hundred pages of story — just enough to add the layer of extra complexity and misdirection the mystery needed.
Rise of the Phoenix by Brendan ArnoldRise of the Phoenix, which I’d categorize as YA high fantasy, follows Will Tavner, a teenage blacksmith’s son in the kingdom of Arulean. Arulean suffers under the rule of its tyrannical king and queen. Will and his closest friends Seb and Aylise live quiet, ordinary lives until Will begins to manifest strange symbols on his arms and strange magical powers to go with them. After which, cue the chaos.
It’s a classic fantasy novel setup. Unfortunately, I bounced off of this one a few times before putting it down at the 40% mark. Nothing here really bothered me, but nothing caught my interest either. Will and his friends felt bland as protagonists, and likewise with Arulean’s rulers as antagonists. The prose and dialogue both felt a little wooden.
Legacy of the Crown by Tim WilburLegacy of the Crown follows Aislynn, an immortal tired of her eternity, on a quest to end both the world and her own existence. The story is about her, the hunter Wraith she encounters by chance, the relationship they build between them, and how their quest fits into the prophecy devised by the titular undead Crown, the world’s last wizard.
This book was entertaining enough, but nothing really wowed me. The worldbuilding is what I think of as “DnD style” – many worlds, races of people, and types of magic, all of which coexist without a unifying conceptual foundation. Two of the novel’s primary settings (Wraith's village and the city of Keshet) feel a little generic. We get a broad outline of politics in Keshet and a glimpse of the city's underworld, but what about their economy, religious and cultural practices, local foods and music, style of architecture, and so on? For the setting to feel properly real instead of fantasy-standard, I think we needed more of those little details that differentiate one culture and location from another. And frankly, Aislynn’s POV isn’t nearly as bleak as it would need to be to justify her rather unheroic goal of ending the world.
My favorite parts of the book were the prologue and the chapters spent in The Beyond. Wilbur is at his best when he’s going for atmospheric eeriness, I think, since the story hits those notes quite effectively. Unfortunately, this is just a fraction of the book. Much of the story instead focuses on (1) a romance storyline and (2) a political intrigue storyline. The former didn't give me the sense of chemistry I wanted and didn't feel emotionally powerful until the In-Between. The latter crammed a book's worth of machinations into just a few chapters, so it all felt much too simple, as though major political change is just sitting there for the asking.
The Sound of The Supernova by Jordan ButlerSound of the Supernova begins in the fictional island setting of Kamini, whose people seem to live happy lives. Unusually happy, since, by virtue of the magical Nova traded to them by a foreign power, they can never get sick. In exchange for a steady supply of Nova, all they're required to trade away are some some (apparently) worthless weeds – a plot hook which intrigued me. The protagonists are three young islanders and friends: Jonah, Luca, and Amaya.
Unfortunately, I was only able to get about 10% into the story before I had to put it down for good. This book needed several more rounds of editing before publication. Each page had several grammatical errors and awkwardly-phrased sentences and the tense kept flip-flopping between past and present, which was especially jarring. I was a little sad to DNF, since it seemed like the plot was about to take some interesting turns, but the prose issues made it impossible to immerse myself in the story and I couldn’t see this book as a possible semifinalist.

I really can’t describe this story better than the author does on Goodreads: “Carrion Saints is a sapphic enemies-to-lovers romance between an immortal saint and a severed head.” Now, romance isn’t my favorite subgenre, but talk about a hook! The author sets that romance in a delightfully creepy postapocalyptic setting. The world is slowly eroding into the void, human civilization is in shambles, and immortal monsters of every variety prey on the survivors.
Enemies-to-lovers is such an easy trope to do badly. I feel like the most common approach is to base the initial opposition on a misunderstanding which the author can resolve to set up a reconciliation. That’s the easy path, which the author does not take. Instead, we’re treated to the fascinating complexity of an evolving relationship between two beings who are genuinely, fundamentally at odds. This is the most screwed-up, manipulative, psychologically twisted relationship I’ve seen since the TV show Hannibal. And it’s so well done.
The story is structured like a travelogue, which often bores me, but the author makes it work. I think it’s all the little details of the setting. Did the pasta in that village need to be shaped like a human ear? Did the tea in that other village need to be brewed from pink beetles? Of course not, but congratulations, you have my undivided attention.
The story is an extremely slow burn. It’s not always clear where the story is going, so the book demands a fair bit of trust from the reader. All I can say is that it all pays off in my favorite sort of ending: beautiful, bittersweet, and deeply existential.
Verdict
Our next semifinalist is:

Carrion Saints, by Hiyodori!
Not only was this my favorite book of the batch, it’s one of the best books I’ve read in the past year. I doubt a sequel is in the cards, but I’m definitely going to pick up something else from this author. Congratulations to Hiyodori and my thanks to all of these authors for their submissions!







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ABOUT THE AUTHOR: Raymond St. Elmo is a programmer of artificial intelligences and virtual realities, who has no time for literary fabrications of fictitious characters and world-building. And yes, that was meant to be ironic.
A degree in Spanish Literature gave him a love of Magic Realism. Programming gave him a job. The job introduced him to artifical intelligence and virtual realities; as close to magic as reality is likely to get outside the covers of a book. And yes, that was meant to be cynical.
The author of several first-person comic-accounts of strange quests for mysterious manuscripts, mysterious girls in cloaks whose face appears SUDDENLY IN THE FLASH OF LIGHTNING. And yes, that was meant to be dramatic.
Publisher: Raymond St. Elmo (January 18, 2026) Page count: 181 pages Formats: ebook, paperback
I'm always looking to see what Raymond St. Elmo creates next. I dig his imagination and playful turn of phrase. Goth the Wanderer is, I think, his shortest book, and it’s pretty unique.
It has a strong Alice in Wonderland vibe. Except, Goth has a long knife, a battle pack, is hard-headed, bossy, brave, and likable. She sets off on a quest to recover her stolen shoe and quickly gathers companions, forming what becomes the Questers of the Shoe. Along the way she’s joined by a conversational wolf, a ghost girl, a candle that talks (mostly in exclamations), and a Very Large Mouse, who is absolutely not a rat. At some point even the shoe thief herself joins the party, which complicates things nicely.
Because it’s short and light on stakes, Goth the Wanderer reads quickly. As expected from the author, the ideas and imagery are vivid and odd, and the tone sits comfortably in cozy-adjacent territory. Don’t expect epic consequences or world-shaking revelations. Do expect wild imagination, whimsical writing, and the pleasure of watching a bossy eleven-year-old charge boldly into the unknown. The story maintains dreamlike wonder with just a hint of menace.
While it works as a standalone, expect nods to the previous Wanderer stories. Night Creep, for example, plays an important role here. The author’s own drawings appear throughout. They're simple, slightly rough, but they suit the book perfectly.
In short, Goth the Wanderer is imaginative, odd, and fun. A bold little quest with strange companions and unlikely places led by a girl who refuses to wait for permission.
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