Happy Halloween! <Ominous Sean Penn voice> Winter is coming.
Writing Progress in October
Not a great deal to report.
Writing continues to be slow and usually steady. Certainly no writing sprints at the moment.
One reason is that there’s a lot of information that’s been hanging over the story for the last couple of books, and I don’t want to info-dump, so it has to be worked in amongst the action and reaction cycle of the story without interrupting the flow.
There’s ‘how’ and ‘why’ in the worldbuilding, for instance, but also, during this book, Amber’s going to be asked who are you ultimately loyal to? There are lots of tricks to appear to answer this question without answering it, but it’s such a fundamental part of Amber’s character that I want to be clear in her response while ensuring that the reader senses how much hangs in the balance over her reply.
In the meantime, there are some easier parts, and here’s some banter between Amber and her team regarding a handsome young werewolf…
Other fun writing stuff that needs a lot of polishing includes fights that take place in the spirit world and the physical world at the same time. This is much more difficult than ordinary fights. I did have feedback on Snake Eyes that some readers strongly preferred the physical world fights. A few hated the entire spirit world section where Amber meets the Stone Serpents and overcomes their challenges. That all had to happen, and I’m taking the core of the criticism to mean that I need to depict spirit world conflict better. More urgent. More ‘real’. I can understand there can be an impression that the spirit world is like a sort of dream state and can’t hurt the protagonists. I guess I’m going to have to show that’s not the case.
Translations
The fourth book of ‘Der lange Weg nach Hause’ (The Long Way Home in German) is now on the Amazon servers. The title is ‘Jetzt oder Nie’ (Now or Never).
I’m still waiting for the final, post-edit & beta-read versions of Bite Back 8 in French ‘L’œil du serpent’, but it’s real close.
A friend of mine is looking at translating Sleight of Hand into Farsi! I will be delighted, but, after the painful sting of attempting to market Bite Back in Spanish, I’m not looking at actively pursuing any languages outside of English, German and French.
Print versions
I have also promised to make the Bite Back novellas into paperbacks, and I will get to it. Soon. Ish.
Snake Eyes Print Book Breaking news:
I happened to use my author print copy of Snake Eyes to check on something and found that there is a massive print error. The chapter titled 58 is in fact 54, and so 54 is 55, 55 is 56, etc. down to 58.
There is no problem with the eBook. I have no idea how this has happened, and it has been corrected now.
My apologies to all those who have bought the print book. I am going to talk to Amazon to see how to resolve this.
Raw Deal offer
I have had one person report that the link for a free copy of Raw Deal (the Bite Back prequel) didn’t work. This is from the link in the back of the main novels. I’ve tested and I can’t see what might have caused this. Has anyone else had a problem?
Monthly content or short story release
I raised this last time and got a few vociferous comments that I should be getting those short stories already available onto Amazon rather than free reading on WordPress.
The stories form part of the Among The Stars Science Fiction series, mainly the long-delayed book 3, ‘A Ship Among the Stars’.
Other
I haven’t forgotten any of my ‘orphans’, but I am seriously writing much slower than I did.
Well, summer has definitely gone!
Writing Progress
I spent a few days this month down at a friend’s house in Teignmouth, a small port in Devon. It’s a place that helps me write because just about the only thing you can hear from his living room is the wind and the seagulls. I used the mornings to write and then we went for strenuous walks in the afternoon. There are lots of hills there. In the evening, I wrote some more and then we made ourselves some dinner and set to putting the world to rights with a glass of wine or two.
Progress on the book is good in fits and starts. I can’t seem to maintain a regular schedule of thousands of words a day. I’m too easily distracted.
As I’ve mentioned in previous updates, Amanda Lloyd comes in as a second point of view character in this book. Have a read of the two snippets below and tell me what you think…
Here’s a snippet from Amanda’s PoV:
And here’s one from Amber’s PoV:
Translations
I’m still waiting for the final, post-edit & beta-read versions of Bite Back 8 in French “L’œil du serpent” and The Long Way Home 4 in German “Jetzt oder Nie”.
The previous French translations have all been done by Bragelonne (now part of Hachette), and they did the covers, which we have to match to a reasonable level. Here is a composite of the images:
Print versions
My apologies, it has taken me a year to get book 8 in German released as a paperback. Anyway, it’s there now.
I have also promised to make the novellas into paperbacks, and I will get to it. Soon. Ish.
Monthly content or short story release
For those who read my Science Fiction, you probably already know that I have a couple of short stories that will form part of book 3 of the Among The Stars series.
Whatever I do with them, they will be temporary, because they’d have to be taken down when the full book is released.
In the meantime, would you like to read them as posts on WordPress, or would you like to buy them as very short novellas on Amazon?
Other
I haven’t forgotten any of my ‘orphans’. Here’s a reminder that Bian’s Tale will continue with The Words of the Dead. This was part of an ad campaign I was working on when I shelved it.
Links at the end of sections
Police procedurals
Renée Ballard
I am re-reading the Renée Ballard series by Michael Connelly (clumsily renamed the Renée Ballard and Harry Bosch series after book 1). There were several reasons for this, among them that my work in progress will involve a criminal investigation and also that I was recommended the Ballard TV series on Amazon Prime based on these books.
The story is about a Los Angeles female detective.
I liked the books the first time around, and still do.
I liked the first season of the TV series, which was sitting at #1 on Amazon Prime recently. I hope they go ahead with subsequent seasons.
The star of the TV show is Maggie Q, as the eponymous detective Ballard. She does a fantastic job, and I’m only angry that Jessica didn’t get to play the part!
But (you knew there was a ‘but’ coming, didn’t you) why did they change so much from the book? Book detectives need a quirk as well as all the other character- and world-building structures around them. In the books, get this, Renée is homeless. Connelly manages to make it work. LA traffic is so appalling, Renée lives in her van and after working the night shift (the ‘Late Show’ of the book 1 title) she picks up her faithful dog from the sitter, surfs and paddle boards a bit, and then sleeps in her tent on a quiet beach. In the show, she lives with her grandmother. Yawn.
Minor gripes aside, I recommend both the books and the TV show.
Eve Ronin
Also re-reading. Very much cut from the same cloth as Renée Ballard, although Eve works in the Los Angeles Sheriff’s Department rather than the LAPD. The LASD has jurisdiction over the parts of LA county outside the main city. The story starts in ‘Lost Hills’ with a jurisdictional dispute!
The quirk in this series is that Eve got her job as a detective by taking advantage of the social media reaction to her unplanned, out-of-uniform takedown of an action movie star who was assaulting his girlfriend. Her early promotion is resented by most of the detectives in the LASD, despite proving herself again and again, and Eve has to continue to engage in the politics of policing just to keep her job.
You think I give my characters a hard time… Eve ends up in hospital on a regular basis. And, like Renée, she doesn’t have an off-switch.
Recommended.
I went back to this series partly because I was re-reading Ballard, to compare and contrast. I enjoyed it just as much, but they are very different in feel. Lee Goldberg has had a lot of success as a TV scriptwriter, and the books are clearly written with TV in mind, so when I heard a rumor there was going to be a TV show, I called Jessica. Nah, too late, they’ve already cast the character.
How good will the TV show be, if it comes off? Impossible to say, but I bet they have trouble with the ambivalent feelings that Eve has about her success, which gives the books depth.
Will they have a TV show, given this is similar to Renée Ballard? I wish I knew how the minds of TV execs worked. Maybe the similarity will encourage them, or maybe it’ll put them off.
I mean, I really don’t know how their minds work. Why do they take quirky characters from books and try and make them more like plain vanilla, audience-will-be-familiar-with-this stereotypes. I get the marketing angle, that there’s already an audience out there for Ballard (65k reviews on Amazon USA) or Ronin (31k reviews), but surely that audience will be irritated that the characters aren’t the ones in the books.
It’s not that there isn’t precedence for creating unusual TV characters rather than taking book characters and damping them down… True Detective comes to mind.
(I’m also watching NCIS Hawaii, which is reasonable, and which the execs stopped after the 3rd season)
Ballard links
USA: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B06WLQL7SH
UK: https://www.amazon.co.uk/dp/B06WLQL7SH
Eve Ronin links
USA: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B07JW53H22/
UK: https://www.amazon.co.uk/dp/B07JW53H22/
Urban Fantasy
Sam Quinn
This series starts with The Slaughtered Lamb Bookstore and Bar. It’s written by Seana Kelly.
It’s popular. Sam Quinn doesn’t get to do much bartending (or book selling). She’s a sort of hybrid werewolf/witch. The book trots along with Sam making lots of dumb choices and managing to stay ahead of things by being more powerful than anyone (reader included) realizes or by Deus Ex Machina plot twists.
I wonder if she gets the same sort of negative feedback as I do for her hot sex scenes?
Ninth House
Highly rated, and written by Leigh Bardugo.
I haven’t gotten into it yet, but it is different, which I am enjoying.
Sam Quinn links
USA: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B089973N41/
UK: https://www.amazon.co.uk/dp/B089973N41/
Ninth House links
USA: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B07NVPTTSZ/
UK: https://www.amazon.co.uk/dp/B07NVPTTSZ/
Others
The Lot Lands series, starting with The Grey Bastards, by Jonathan French.
Orcs! Nasty fellows. Book 1 is a hugely enjoyable read. I have the second, which has a change of narrating character, and I haven’t fully gotten into it yet.
Urban Fantasy
Current project: Bite Back 9.
Not a huge amount to say about writing progress, other than August wasn’t the best month for concentrated work.
As mentioned in last month’s update, some of the scenes are being provided from Amanda Lloyd’s point of view. It’s quite fun using a different voice and perception of events to describe what’s happening at Haven.
I’m still debating on the amount of darkness I have in this book. It’s not so much the darkness itself, it’s the arc of the story. In a single book, the traditional arc of the book goes something like this:
In theory, a series should have a similar arc, but I’d drive many of you away if I spent an entire book on section 4, where everything seems hopeless. Bite Back 9 is in that area. Amber keeps winning, but she’s losing herself in the process.
As mentioned last time, Amber’s focus for much of this book is hunting down Askrynos, the Matlal operative that is highly placed in the government. That’s distracting her from the new Assembly, i.e. the Assembly put together to represent all the paranormal races. It’s a race between that and the official acknowledgement in the human world that the paranormal exists.
Translations.
Snake Eyes is nearly there in French. I’ve no idea how to market it and the novellas (which are ready to go) in France, where Bite Back 1-7 are still being published by the Bragelonne division of Hachette.
Science Fiction
Book 4 in The Long Way Home, Don’t Stop Now to be released as ‘Jetzt oder Nie’ (Now or Never), has been translated, but it still in quality control checking. I don’t have a German-specific Facebook page for Science Fiction, but I will be announcing the release on the German UF page and the SciFi & author pages I run.
Marketing
Facebook is endlessly tweaking its algorithms, and several notable authors have posted that their sales have slowed dramatically, including writers like Jennifer Estep.
I don’t know what they’re doing. I’m spending much less on advertising with Facebook, but my team are coming up with an Amazon campaign, which is probably what we will need in France anyway.
I’ll keep you posted!
Other
I’m learning the piano. I can sort of play melodies with my right hand, and chords with my left, but when it gets to putting them together… lol!
I used to play the guitar at school (very badly), but I wrote a lot of lyrics, to which my friend Colin composed music.
There are a couple of lines in my books, which I’ll be turning into complete songs, but don’t worry, I will not be singing them. I may try and persuade Jessica.
May release them in the newsletter…
Also re-read a couple of police procedural books to get my mind into Amber being a PI again. I’ll review those and others in a separate post.
These were the signed books I gave away to folk on my Patreon last year:

We also have an active discord.
For higher tier Patrons I do consults and chapter critiques.
Also social media follows, early signed copies of upcoming books, and tuckerisation into new novels.
In addition, I have a collection of unpublished work including 7 books and numerous short stories that tier 3+ patrons can access.
So ... check it out!
Patreon is a great way to support authors and get involved in their work at a deeper level.
Back in late 2023 I started writing something, and in early 2024 that something was a complete book, called The Bookshop Book.
In this post in late 2024 I was offering folk on my Patreon access to it.
The book centres on a bookshop called ... Books.
The name is explained not as a lack of imagination on the owner's part but by the fact that the proprietor's surname is Books, and Books's Books felt rather too much for him.
All good so far.
Today a Facebook advert alerted me to a new TV series called Bookish about to drop 2 days from now. Here's a still from the trailer:

Eagle-eyed readers will notice that the bookshop (around which this series is set) is called Book's.
Moreover, it turns out that it bears this name because the proprietor (the star of the show) is a Mr Book...
So - I now expect that when The Bookshop Book hits the shelves in 2026, if Bookish turns out to be a popular show, I will be accused of copying from it.
And the point of this blogpost is simply to flag the coincidence at work here.
Ironically, The Bookshop Book is tangentially related to The Library Trilogy, and in both works I talk about how the Library uses the currents of coincidence to bring interested parties together and manipulate the world. Coincidence?
HELL OF A WITCH
The hotly anticipated sequel to HELL FOR HIRE...
"Featuring a motley crew of loveable demons, a chaotic male forest witch with a sassy talking cat familiar, snarky sentient weapons, wicked warlocks, and plenty of magical mayhem, Hell for Hire is a bewitching and diabolically fun urban fantasy that is as thrilling as it is wholesome." - Before We Go Book Blog

Introducing...HELL FOR HIRE coming out June 4!
The Crew
No Victor lasts forever.
Victor thought he won when he became the Hero. He thought he won when he took over the DFZ. He thought he’d made himself untouchable.
He’s wrong.
Lola isn’t the sad little monster she used to be. She has a plan, she has allies, she has more magic than she ever dreamed possible. Killing one blood mage should be easy with an entire fairy kingdom at her fingertips, but Victor didn't make himself a god by playing fair, and his bag of tricks is far from empty. Taking him down will require everything Lola and her friends can bring, but if there’s one thing Lola’s always been, it’s determined. No matter the cost, no matter what it takes, she will see this through.
To the bloody end.
Get your copy now in ebook, KU, print, or audio!This was an extremely satisfying book to write. I don't think I've ever enjoyed wrapping a series so much. It's epic, it's awesome, and I cannot wait for you to read it in ebook, print, or KU or listen on audio, cause they're all out today!
No Victor lasts forever.
Victor thought he won when he became the Hero. He thought he won when he took over the DFZ. He thought he’d made himself untouchable.
He’s wrong.
Lola isn’t the sad little monster she used to be. She has a plan, she has allies, she has more magic than she ever dreamed possible. Killing one blood mage should be easy with a fairy kingdom at her fingertips, but Victor didn't make himself a god by playing fair, and his bag of tricks is far from empty. Taking him down will take everything Lola and her friends can bring, but if there’s one thing Lola’s always been, it’s determined. No matter the cost, no matter what it takes, she will see this through.
To the bloody end.
Preorder Now!Happy 2024 everyone!
"Exquisitely trademark Rachel Aaron. Immensely readable & instantly engaging, with new characters that you can't help loving. The inclusion of fairy lore just leveled up the already fascinating world of the DFZ. So good, so fun!"- TS Chan, Novel NotationsReturn to the DFZ with a brand new series, introducingBy A Silver Thread
In the world’s most magical metropolis where spirits run noodle shops and cash-strapped dragons stage photo-ops for tourists, people still think fairies are nothing but stories, and that’s exactly how the fairies like it. It’s a lot easier to feast on humanity’s dreams when no one believes you exist. But while this arrangement works splendidly for most fair folk, Lola isn’t one of the lucky ones.Today's the day!

When Mary Good Crow came out of the crystal into the arms of her sister, the last thing she wanted was another fight. But war is coming to the Great Plains. With crystal on their side, the Lakota are poised to annihilate the town of Medicine Rocks, forcing Mary to choose between the friends she’s finally found and the family she’s always longed for.
When Rel Reiner accepted her father’s dark bargain to save Josie and the others, the last thing she expected was to survive. But there’s more to the Reiner’s magic than ghosts and bones. Magic Rel will have to embrace if she ever wants to walk in her own skin again.
When Josie Price left the crystal mines one step ahead of death, the last thing she intended to do was quit. But the wolves in town are circling, and with the crystal going crazy and the cavalry riding to war, just finding a way to protect her people might cost her everything she came to Montana to build.
Three women divided by a war none of them wants. But Josie, Mary, and Rel have always been strongest together, and with the world’s magical future on the line, “together” might be the only way anyone survives.
Get your copy now in ebook, audio, print, or KU!
I can’t tell you how excited I am for y'all to read this book! I'm sooo proud of this ending and this series as a whole. If you haven't tried out THE LAST STAND OF MARY GOOD CROW yet, I hope you'll give it a go! This series has been such a wild ride, and I really hope you enjoy it!
This is the first launch for what I hope is going to be a very busy 2023. I’ve got a new DFZ series I’ll be announcing soon along with other fun stuff, so if you're not already subscribed to my New Release Newsletter, I hope you'll come over and say hi! Subscribers always get first dibs on the good stuff, I never share your info, and I only send out emails when I have a new book. No risk, just awesome, so I hope you'll join in!
Thank you so much for all your support over the years. Enjoy THE BATTLE OF MEDICINE ROCKS, and I’ll see you soon with a new story!
Yours with a hat tip,
Rachel Aaron


"Brimming with imagination, wonderful characters and captivating magic. "
- Novel NotionsIt's time!

Hungry darkness, haunted guns, tunnels that move like snakes--the crystal mines of Medicine Rocks, Montana are a place only the bravest and greediest dare. Discovered in 1866, the miraculous rock known as crystal quickly rose to become the most expensive substance on the planet, driving thousands to break the treaties and invade the sacred buffalo lands of the Sioux for a chance at the wealth beneath. But mining crystal risks more than an arrow in the chest. The beautiful rock has a voice of its own. A voice that twists minds and calls unnatural powers.
A voice that turns men into monsters.
Mary Good Crow hears it. Half white, half Lakota, rejected by both, she’s forged a new life guiding would-be miners through the treacherous caves. To her ears, the crystal sings a beautiful song, one the men she guides would gladly burn her as a witch for hearing. So, when an heiress from Boston arrives with a proposition that could change her life, Mary agrees to push deeper into the caves than she’s ever dared.
But there are secrets buried in the Deep Caves that even Mary doesn’t know. The farther she goes, the closer she gets to the voice that’s been calling her all this time. A voice that could change the bloody story of the West, or destroy it all.
"Possibly the best alternate historical fantasy that you will read."- Fantasy Book Critic
It's finally here! The first book in my new series is out today in ebook, print, and Kindle Unlimited! HOORAY!
We're recording the audio version right now, so hopefully that will be available quickly as well. I'll send an email as soon as I have a date, so make sure you're subscribed to my New Release Mailing List to get all the info on, well, new releases! (And nothing else. Trust me, I hate spam as much as you!)
Thank you all so much for being my readers, and I hope you love Mary's story!
Yours always,
Rachel Aaron
It’s been a while, but I’m back with an new novel in an new world! Get ready for…

Deadwood meets Lord of the Rings in this Epic Fantasy of the West!
Hungry darkness, haunted guns, tunnels that move like snakes--the crystal mines of Medicine Rocks, Montana are a place only the bravest and greediest dare. Discovered in 1866, the miraculous rock known as crystal quickly rose to become the most expensive substance on the planet, driving thousands to break the treaties and invade the sacred buffalo lands of the Sioux for a chance at the wealth beneath. But mining crystal risks more than an arrow in the chest. The beautiful rock has a voice of its own. A voice that twists minds and calls unnatural powers.
A voice that turns men into monsters.
Mary Good Crow hears it. Half white, half Lakota, rejected by both, she’s forged a new life guiding would-be miners through the treacherous caves. To her ears, the crystal sings a beautiful song, one the men she guides would gladly burn her as a witch for hearing. So, when an heiress from Boston arrives with a proposition that could change her life, Mary agrees to push deeper into the caves than she’s ever dared.
But there are secrets buried in the Deep Caves that even Mary doesn’t know. The farther she goes, the closer she gets to the voice that’s been calling her all this time. A voice that could change the bloody story of the West, or destroy it all.
Coming to eBook and Kindle Unlimited on JUNE 1, 2022! Print and Audio release coming soon!
Hello everyone!
I know it’s been a while since we left Opal in the DFZ. Like everyone else on the planet, I got kicked down pretty hard by the pandemic. But sometimes being forced to step away from your work means space gets made for something different, and wow, is this different.
THE LAST STAND OF MARY GOOD CROW is a story I’ve been wanting to tell for a long time. We’re talking crazy magic, giant battles, haunted guns, messed up family situations, sky-high stakes, and (of course) a giant cast of fun, hot-mess characters all set against the epic backdrop of the Great Sioux War, which ends veeeeery differently than the real one. (Don’t worry, Custer still dies.)
I realize historical Western feels like a pretty big jump from Urban Fantasy, but this is a Rachel Aaron book through and through. If you liked my other series, I heartily encourage you to give this one a try. I promise you won’t be disappointed!
You can read a sample right now over on my website. The eBook and Kindle versions will be out on June 1, 2022 with print very soon after. For those who prefer audio books, we’re recording right now, so it won’t be too long of a wait. I’ll send another email to let you know as soon as the audio version is available.
Thank you as always for being my readers/listeners! Y’all are the ones I write for, and I just can’t wait for you to start THE LAST STAND OF MARY GOOD CROW!
Yours always,
Rachel Aaron
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